How to Write a (Great) Letter of Continued Interest (LOCI)

How to Write a (Great) Letter of Continued Interest (LOCI)

What is a LOCI?

A Letter of Continued Interest (LOCI) is a formal communication sent to a college or university to express your ongoing enthusiasm and commitment to attending their institution, even after being deferred or waitlisted. This letter is your chance to:

• Reaffirm your interest in the school.
• Provide updates on new accomplishments or experiences.
• Demonstrate why you remain a strong candidate.

While a LOCI does not guarantee admission, it is an opportunity to showcase your persistence and enthusiasm.

What Should I Include in My Letter?

When writing your LOCI, make sure to include the following elements:

1. Gratitude:
   • Start by thanking the admissions committee for reviewing your application and providing you the opportunity to remain on their waitlist or deferred list.
2. Reaffirmed Interest:
   • Clearly state that the school remains your top choice (if true) and explain why. Be specific! Mention programs, professors, campus culture, or other aspects that genuinely resonate with you.
3. Updates on Achievements:
   • Share any significant updates since submitting your application, such as:
     • Improved grades or academic achievements.
     • New awards, leadership roles, or extracurricular involvement.
     • Relevant personal growth experiences.
4. Connection to the School:
   • Highlight how your recent achievements align with the school’s values, mission, or programs. Make it clear why you are a great fit for the institution.
5. Gratitude and Professional Closing:
   • Conclude your letter with another note of thanks and express your continued excitement about the possibility of attending. Use a professional and respectful tone throughout.

What Should I NOT Include in My Letter?

Avoid the following pitfalls:

• Demanding Language: Do not come across as entitled or pushy.
• Rehashing Your Application: Avoid repeating information already included in your original application.
• Negativity: Never criticize the admissions process or other schools.
• Overloading with Updates: Stick to significant accomplishments or updates; quality over quantity.
• Generic Statements: Avoid vague expressions like “I love your school.” Be specific about what draws you to the institution.

Sample LOCI Template

[Your Name]
[Your Address]
[City, State, ZIP Code]
[Email Address]
[Phone Number]
[Date]

[Admissions Office’s Address]
[College/University Name]
[City, State, ZIP Code]

Dear [Admissions Committee/Specific Admissions Officer],

Thank you for taking the time to review my application for [specific program/college name] and for offering me the opportunity to remain on the [deferred/waitlisted] list. [College/University Name] remains my top choice, and I am writing to express my continued interest in joining the [Class of Year].

Since submitting my application, I have [describe specific updates, such as earning a notable award, achieving a higher GPA, or contributing to a meaningful project]. These experiences have deepened my passion for [specific academic or extracurricular interest], which aligns closely with opportunities at [College/University Name].

For example, I am particularly excited about [specific program, research opportunity, or faculty member]. The prospect of contributing to [specific aspect of the school] excites me, as it reflects my goals of [personal or academic ambition].

Thank you again for considering my application. I am truly enthusiastic about the possibility of joining the [College/University Name] community and contributing to its vibrant campus life. Please let me know if there are any additional materials I can provide to support my application.

Sincerely,
[Your Full Name]
[Your Applicant ID, if applicable]

Tips and Tricks for a Stellar LOCI

1. Be Concise:
   • Keep your LOCI to one page. Admissions officers have limited time to review materials.
2. Proofread:
   • Spelling and grammar errors can distract from your message. Review your letter carefully.
3. Personalize Your Letter:
   • Tailor your LOCI to the specific school. Show genuine interest by referencing specific programs, professors, or experiences.
4. Submit Promptly:
   • Send your LOCI within a few weeks of receiving your deferment or waitlist notice.
5. Follow Instructions:
   • Check the school’s website or communications for any specific guidelines about sending LOCIs. Some schools may have strict policies or forms to use.

By crafting a thoughtful and sincere LOCI, you can make a strong case for your admission while reinforcing your enthusiasm for the school.

Laura Barr is a deeply experienced and passionate college consultant, founder of Emerging Educational Consulting, and creator of the Capstone Certification program. She’s dedicated to helping families and professionals navigate the college application process with simplicity, deliberation, and joy. Want to learn more about our services? Tell us your story!